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Post by swordexpert on Mar 5, 2002 23:23:23 GMT -5
The Last Battle With a swoosh of his wand, and a tap of his shoe, Harry Potter looks towards you!! He stares at your cloak, And the evil look in your eye, And now it's time to say, "bye bye" He rubs his wand, And gets ready to kill, You plead and pout, and even pretend your ill. But there is NO time, He has made up his mind, You are standing still, trapped in a very tight bind! He looks you over, And snicker's "good bye!!!" Cause now it is time for the evil Lord to DIE! Tell me what you think. I hope you like it, it's just off of the top of my head! I LOVE Harry Potter, so I thought it was high time I made up a poem about him dueling the Dark Lord! If you like it reply, if not then give me suggestions or email me at Ali_Rox69@hotmail.com
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Post by skyprincess on Mar 15, 2002 13:30:27 GMT -5
It's a great poem. Harry seems too confident, and Voldemort seems really weak, I think the last battle should be more suspensive and competitive though. It's well done anyway!
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areila
1st year
i love hp it rules and for anti-hp they need to get a life
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Post by areila on Jul 27, 2002 14:27:58 GMT -5
that sreally good but by the time he kills voldie or voldie kills him he will be older and more confident in him self
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